Goodnews in Sodom's Playground.

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"C'mon Josh. Don't be a party-pooper. There are waves after waves of fun things to do at the moment, but burying your face on whatever game you're playing with your phone is not on the list. At least, not for now. You need to have real fun." Chided Mike.

"Real fun?" Josh held his phone with his right hand and slowly used the middle finger of his left hand to stroke his forehead. Anyone that knows Josh long enough can tell that he is very uncomfortable to be in that place.

Josh has never been to a wild place like this. The music is so loud, he could barely speak intelligible words to anyone around him without raising his voice. The intense smell of alcohol in the club is getting on his nerves and he can also see some folks sniffing some substance which he naively assumed to be cocaine.

That's not all.

He feels suffocated where he's sitting. The unpleasant smell from whatever is being smoked in that club is messing with his head.

As if his ears and nose have not had enough discomfort for the day, what comes to sight every freaking time he raises his eyes are utterly disgusting by his own standards. Josh have always had his perception about the x-rated theatrical shithousery that plays out in places like this, but whatever he imagined is no match to the real thing playing out in his face. The real thing is beyond the stretch of his imagination.

Josh was feeling gutted with himself for allowing Mike and Chris to drag him into this hellish place. He was thinking of a good excuse he can use to walk out of this Sodom's Playground, but a tap on his shoulder pulled him back to reality.

The tap was from Chris who have been playing around with a bunch of strippers since they entered Sodom's Playground, the Club. Chris joined Josh and Mike on the table and immediately took a pint of beer without a pause.

"It's time to go, right?" Josh asked no one in particular.

"C'mon, Josh. The party is just getting started. Besides, you've been sitting in this chair since 2 hours ago. I noticed you were getting bored, but not any longer because I'm here with a goodnews. Tell me you want to hear about it." Chris winked, gulping down another pint of beer.

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He paused and looked at Josh to know if he has Josh's attention. Josh looked at Mike and then Chris. The look on Josh's face shows that he's fairly interested in hearing what this "goodnews" is all about. What choice does he have? Knowing Chris, he will still spill the beans regardless of what he says.

"You see those cheeks over there?" Chris said, tapping the table as he continued. Josh turned to look, but got a kick from Chris under the table.

"C'mon, don't stare! you don't want to announce to the world that you are an amateur". Mike yelled at Josh. "Just take a glance and look away", Mike advised.

As naive as Josh was about this kinda lifestyle, the trajectory of what this "goodnews" is all about appears to be crystal clear to him. He can already make head and tail of what Chris was about to say next.

Having full knowledge of what was coming next, this was the perfect time for Josh to make himself clear and tell his friends that enough is enough. There is no better time for him to make it clear that coming here was a mistake. There is something about the way he was nurtured by his parents.

Josh was raised in a normal old fashioned home by his Dad and Mum. They want the best for him and they have what it takes to give him the best. He was never allowed to make his own decisions. Everything he has been doing were based on a manual crafted by his parents. He never knew what it's like to face the dark reality of this world.

To crown it all, Josh knows nothing about being disagreeable. He is just like a kid living inside the body of a 23 years old; A gullible young lad, filled with a mixture of timidity, innocence, and naivety... in equal proportion.

Chris and Mike know these about Josh and their grand aim of bringing Josh to Sodom's Paradise is to make him see what it's like to be laid by a lady. They want the 'virgin boy' to get sullied and they will stop at nothing to see this happening.

"So, what do you think of those chicks?" Chris asked.

"The chick by the right is Lizzy. She is the Amen to the prayer of every virgin dude like yourself. Her tender lips and palms will place you on a ride to Paradise once she gets to have her way with you. She is the patient type that likes to take it slowly... One step at a time. I guarantee that after having a moment with her, your inner desires will be laid bare, consistently asking for more. In fact..."

Josh slid his phone inside his Jean trouser and brushed his palms on his laps. Heads in hands, he looked up and saw that Chris was still dropping punchlines about the splendorousness and glamorousness of Lizzy.

"I think you've said enough about her", blurted Josh.

"Relax", Mike took over, "I don't think you want to know about the blonde chick beside Lizzy."

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"Her name is Bianca and she's a wild chick. She will walk all over you like a lioness trying to devour a kill. I suggest you get started with Lizzy and take your mind off Bianca. She is for..."

"Stop! Just stop!
Both of you have to stop this!" Josh demanded.

He appears to have had enough of this. Standing up from the round table, he fixed his eyes on Mike and Chris.

"Meet me outside", he said, as he walked out of the club.

Chris and Mike looked at each other with a grim face towards Josh. "Why is he suddenly putting on the garment of disagreeableness?", they thought. They stood up immediately and followed Josh outside. The look on Josh's face was no longer that of a normal lad. He looked like someone that knows exactly what he wants.

"You know what?" Josh continued...

"All my life, I've been told what to do and what not to do. No one ever asks what I really want to do. It's always;"

Duuuuuu Dissssss Josh!

Duuuuuu Daaaattt Josh!

"And now? What do you want me to do? Do you really want me to get laid and get sullied? Wow! Just, wow! It must have been fun to toy with a 'virgin boy', but I'm not having any of that. Try your fucking luck with another virgin boy!" He spat.

Josh was still fuming as he angrily kicked the waste bin placed by the corner, before walking out on Chris and Mike.

Chris and Mike looked at each other in awkward silence before Mike finally broke the silence;

"I think the bloke inhaled too much smoke inside the club for his own good."

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Great story
Josh though😂😂
He would have just rested at home

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Hahah... Yes oooo. He was dragged around for so long, but he finally found his voice and decided to make his own decision. Haha

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That is a nice story. One wonders from the title if this might be a NSFW story, but you manage the boundaries well. You skillfully describe a graphic scene without being graphic. Quite sensitive and clever of you. Josh seems to be at a loss, but he is never at a loss for what he wants for himself. His friends did him a favor. In the past he did what his parents wanted. In the end he realized that he would do the 'unsullied' thing because he wanted. He finally grew up.

Nice development of character and great scene descriptions. In a way this fits beautifully with this week's prompt: To Create. Josh created his own mature persona. If you'd like to you may link it to the prompt post for consideration in our contest.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, @kenechukwu97. Have you supported two other members of the Inkwell community with your comments? Thank you!

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Thanks so much for your review of the story. It's interesting to see how Josh was enticed and even got pushed to the wall, just to make him do what his friends wanted. But, he experienced an awakening. Indeed, this wasn't a loss on his part. He finally learned to be disagreeable.

Thanks for your suggestion. I will be linking the post to InkWell's prompt for the week.

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😂.
I think Josh has heard enough of Lizzy's glamour to last him a lifetime.
Plus, he did the mature thing by walking away from what he didn't want to do.

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Lolzzzzz... Josh didn't prepare for that, but the whole hype he got about Lizzy was filled his ears non-stop. Haha. The young lad had to run for his dear life 😂

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Oh my my 😂😂😂, my heart was beating fast for Josh 😂, I thought he will mess up but no, he escaped 😂😂....those friends of him are something else 😂

Nice story kene ...

Josh my man!
Run with the speed of light...no turning back young lad..lolz 😆

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Lolzzzzz... Josh really passed through a big challenge that night. The temptation was a tough one and he got pushed to the wall before he finally decided to make a decision that is in accordance to what he really wants. Haha

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I enjoyed reading every bit of this story, he was able to speak out eventually, he has always done the wishes of others, but this time he wanted to do his nice wish.

Thanks for sharing.

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Yeah. Josh got to say things as be feel. It was a little late, but better late then never. Hehe.

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This is an amazing story Ken, I love how Josh never stooped so low in allowing his friends to tell him what to do and what not to.

This will be the start of something incredible in his life.

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Yeah. Josh finally got to do the needful. Perhaps, a little late. But, in this case, it's better late than never.

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I really like your story. The boy did not allow himself to be manipulated by others. They have guts.

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That's so much. Josh was tired of being dragged around. He finally got to say speak up about his own desires

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hahahaha why did the scene close right when we are seeing Josh become a Tiger! LOLOL
I want to see what he would do hahahahahaha

love to see you writing fiction!! and at the perfect time for the inkwell dreemport collab! hehehehe get it in there!

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Hahah... We are all scared that Josh may turn the scene to a bloodbath if he allows the tiger in him to be out for too long. Haha.

The post is already shared on our site. Hehe. Have fun

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Absolutely hilarious, I thought. You capture the group dynamic really well; I recognize this trio of guys, or the way they relate to each other, from my youth. Some of your tropes brought a smile and a laugh. This made me smile:

She will walk all over you like a lioness trying to devour a kill.

And this one made me laugh out loud:

"Why is he suddenly putting on the garment of disagreeableness?"

Very entertaining story! Excellent job.

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Hahah... Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts on this and also for the appraisal. This is my first attempt at fictional writing and I feel like I should do more. I want to improve on this. Hehe.

Thanks so much for checking out the story. I genuinely appreciate your feedback.

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Absolutely I think you should do more. This is awesome for a first attempt!

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Just imagining the description of the club also suffocated me. Introverts like me would never go to noisy, crowded places like clubs. Poor Josh is being teased just because he's a virgin, although there's nothing wrong with it.

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Yeah. Such places are usually like that to introverts. Meanwhile, some people can be extroverted, but still won't feel okay to be in a place like that. Haha

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I never thought some extroverts can also be uncomfortable in fun-filled places.

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You would be surprised to hear this, but even the extroverts know their limit. Haha. They go to some places and swear never to step in again. Lolz

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts in this

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Josh reminded me of myself some years ago, don't let me go into detail.

The way you are being teased when they know how much you don't like some silly lifestyle can be very annoying. Josh knew what he wanted and being able to resist his friends was a great thing. Even if he must become a bad guy, it would be not because his friends wanted him to be so.

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Hahah.. it's very common to see things like this. People make caricature of someone for the way they choose to live their life especially when it's someone that doesn't want to go with the so-called trendy lifestyle.

Josh was able to step out of there before things got out of hand. Haha

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Yeah, when it's not your thing it's cool to say no. 😌🙃

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Hahah... exactly. He should have said NO as soon as possible.

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What the hell kind of response to a heartfelt expression was that? That Mike guy... 🤣

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Hahah... Mike was cruising all through. He wants to enjoy the moment to the fullest

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As Josh only us can take that decision and stand up for ourselves
Nice story
Came from @dreemport

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Yeah. That's right. Decisions are ours to make. The earlier we do it, the better

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